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Posted: August 5, 2010 02:41 pm  | |
      IRC Nickname: Harmony Group: Ex-Member Posts: 333 Member No.: 2281 Joined: June 4, 2010 Total Events Attended: 26    | I agree with Randy. I think slowing down how fast the land emerges would make it better, other than that I think its really awesome -------------------- Hollow Fyre ~  ~ Lion Tamer ºO•-)•––––––––•(-• •°• °• oOHarmonyOo •°•°• •-)•––––––––•(-•Oº The Most Strongest and Influential Army |
Posted: August 7, 2010 12:44 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: Vephy Group: Elite Guardian Posts: 6186 Member No.: 813 Joined: June 10, 2008 Total Events Attended: 478 | Is the land going to turn into a large mountain? Maybe a zoom in over the mountain ridge of rogue's castle would be cool when showing the wilderness. Then an epic charge over greater demon zone? --------------------   |
Posted: August 7, 2010 02:01 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: Tnuac Group: Emeritus Posts: 1806 Member No.: 51 Joined: December 30, 2007 Total Events Attended: 58 | Awesome, nice work I will say, as a physical geographer i'm baffled how there is an isolated rock pool in the front of the picture which goes up and down with the waves / tides, even without being joined to the sea? Its not like anyone else is sad enough to realie, but still -------------------- ~Aetas: carpe diem quam minimum credula postero~ "Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow"  |
Posted: August 7, 2010 03:29 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: His Lordship Group: Founder Posts: 6029 Member No.: 1 Joined: December 26, 2007 Total Events Attended: 129 | Ok wish me luck. Gonna draw trees springing up from the ground. If I can do it in 7 hours or less I'll consider that an accomplishment. Getting this finished in time will be a real struggle. The most important parts are the beginning and the end though. So if I'm out of time, I'll skimp out on the middle. --------------------  |
Posted: August 7, 2010 06:31 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: DG_Keanu Group: Council Posts: 4782 Member No.: 2033 Joined: August 25, 2009 Total Events Attended: 173 | From about 3 seconds in to the original cloud sequence, it seems very laggy, although that might just be my computer or this render. As it now zooms in from space, I'd say when the view comes fully into the clouds and it becomes a solid, white grey, then fade in the cloud sequence, but at a consistent speed. At the moment they seem to start slow and then speed up. The explosion looks epic. My only suggestion is, maybe for the actual explosion, light the entire sky up white, then dim it down to the blue, rather than just a fade from black to blue. That's all  --------------------  [05:42] <+WG_Keanu> I think I got a semi just looking at the pic [05:42] <%kat> same |
Posted: August 8, 2010 12:16 am | |
 IRC Nickname: Garrett_xD Group: Elite Guardian Posts: 1316 Member No.: 2159 Joined: November 28, 2009 Total Events Attended: 132 | is there music, or am i deaf if there isnt make it the simpsons intro --------------------  |
Posted: August 9, 2010 05:29 pm | |
| IRC Nickname: Fire Lion Sword Group: Emeritus Posts: 1189 Member No.: 103 Joined: January 4, 2008 Total Events Attended: 3 | The speed seems fine to me. I do have an issue with the waves along the shore, but you said you can't change it... so I would probably suggest adding extra waves, to add the effect of the premature breaking of water caused by stray boulders, and also to redistribute the attention, to help mask the original waves. Several rows of white water further out from the land could prove effective. -------------------- --------- 獅の炎 ----------  ----------- 忍☯者 ----------- |
Posted: August 9, 2010 05:43 pm | |
| IRC Nickname: His Lordship Group: Founder Posts: 6029 Member No.: 1 Joined: December 26, 2007 Total Events Attended: 129 | I'm in agreement, but I've run out of time. One week to do the rest of it. Can't afford the time. -------------------- |
Posted: August 9, 2010 07:34 pm | |
| IRC Nickname: Fire Lion Sword Group: Emeritus Posts: 1189 Member No.: 103 Joined: January 4, 2008 Total Events Attended: 3 | I came to this thread too late. -------------------- --------- 獅の炎 ---------- ----------- 忍☯者 ----------- |
Posted: August 10, 2010 09:08 am | |
| IRC Nickname: Vephy Group: Elite Guardian Posts: 6186 Member No.: 813 Joined: June 10, 2008 Total Events Attended: 478 | Hire another animator to help you smooth it out perhaps? Just kidding, not very realistic lol. -------------------- |
Posted: August 10, 2010 04:13 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: DZ Group: Elite Guardian Posts: 2991 Member No.: 18 Joined: December 29, 2007 Total Events Attended: 238 | The beginning seems to be choppy/laggy but doesn't look like you have the time to fix it right now so just focus on finishing the thing. I like it though, its a cool idea and I can't wait to see the finished product. -------------------- Now back to the good part! |
Posted: August 10, 2010 05:50 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: Ret[Keith] Group: Emeritus Posts: 2049 Member No.: 86 Joined: January 1, 2008 Total Events Attended: 82 | Looks, very nice - Sun thing is really cool - Like everyone else says - the only part that needs to be fixed is in te beginnning . between approaching the clouds and going through them, things are too blurry to be relly good and it seems like a lag when it probably isn't -------------------- Best Firemaker in WG no lie   <--- rofl1st joined WG: October 18th, 2005. Ex-WG mod, OPH winner  ^My original idea (U GOIN DOWN TWIZ)^ 189th person to get "100" firemaking Hash Unit, Tun Unit, C-Unit    |
Posted: August 10, 2010 11:11 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: Sammii Group: Clan Friend Posts: 15 Member No.: 2347 Joined: August 10, 2010 Total Events Attended: 1 | For some reason i can't see it, it's just a black box. --------------------  |
Posted: August 11, 2010 12:21 am | |
| IRC Nickname: His Lordship Group: Founder Posts: 6029 Member No.: 1 Joined: December 26, 2007 Total Events Attended: 129 | As previously mentioned, it is lag. It's graphics-intense, and it will go away in the file conversion. -------------------- |
Posted: August 16, 2010 06:09 am | |
 IRC Nickname: bto Group: Emeritus Posts: 3815 Member No.: 196 Joined: February 3, 2008 Total Events Attended: 332 | When the sara guy retrieves the ore with magic and the camera zooms out, I was given the impression that he shot it towards the zammy guy. It took me 2-3 replays where I had to concentrate on that particular scene to realize what was truly happening. Maybe make that part longer, or the characters bigger in those frames? Could be the fact that its 2:11 and im not seeing things clearly. -------------------- bto  Ex-WG Warlord  "It is our direction, not our intentions, that lead us to our destinations." |
Posted: August 16, 2010 02:59 pm | |
| IRC Nickname: |Tezza| Group: Emeritus Posts: 1430 Member No.: 60 Joined: December 31, 2007 Total Events Attended: 12 | That.Is.Fucking.Amazing. Growing trees/moss giant/nekkid eve are breathtaking  -------------------- Joined Wg - 18th January '05 (s4 vet) Ex-WG Moderator  |
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