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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:20 pmTop
   
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Look, I'm not wanting praise. I just want to know if anyone has BAD impressions on it or wants something changed.
I can't afford flaws.

If you think the animation is sucky somewhere, or the characters look dodgy, I would like to know.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:22 pmTop
   
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Massive like like like.
Idc if you don't want praise.... you're going to get it.
Although it DOES look like cum neko2.gif
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:23 pmTop
   
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Very good, how long will it last for?
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:24 pmTop
   
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Billy it's 30 seconds... so the current length.
Obviously I have to get rid of the guy in ice and continue showing fighting shots.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:24 pmTop
   
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Looks cool

What is it going to be about in RS?
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:25 pmTop
   
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Please put wg.com background music as the background music for this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_iPq7HHZqsI

I remember like 5 years ago when i was at school, showing my old friends the wg site saying that I wanted to be in that clan :C. Everyone loved a bit of wg :L

That music sent shivers down my spine when watching a flash movie you made with it. Thats what WG meant to me.

I dont know if you still have a link to that flash lordshep?

WHAT DO YOU FIGHT FOR DERRRPP

omg i think i just came a little
 
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"Take lobsters because I don't want us to die"
-HisLordship on WG pvp PKing, 26 April 2010.

Posted: February 14, 2010 06:27 pmTop
   
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QUOTE: vephyrus @ February 14, 2010 06:24 pm)
Looks cool

What is it going to be about in RS?

Veph lol.
It's this clan.
See the purple capes, and Dorcha?
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:33 pmTop
   
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QUOTE: His Lordship @ February 14, 2010 01:28 pm)
QUOTE: vephyrus February 14, 2010 06:24 pm
Looks cool

What is it going to be about in RS?

Veph lol.
It's this clan.
See the purple capes, and Dorcha?

I thought that was your swedish creation and oki
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:34 pmTop
   
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Its my flash it can be anything i want it to be.
It just so happens that Dorcha moved to Sweden.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:46 pmTop
   
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Wow I always wanted to visit Sweden.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:46 pmTop
   
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Being honest, the dragon claws are a bit too short.

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compared to your video, makes it look like he's wielding dragon claws.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 06:48 pmTop
   
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Ok thanks Kyle that's an easy fix.
 
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Posted: February 14, 2010 08:02 pmTop
   
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Also, the intro is a bit too short. I could barely read all the text before it faded out neko2.gif
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 02:43 amTop
   
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Hmm... I did think mrs. sexy looked a bit dodgy, if we're going for extreme detail. The face seemed a bit odd to me, and her staff arm didn't look right in comparison to her body. I suck at drawing people and I'm even worse at doing it in flash, so I shopped it a bit. Old and my take:

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I changed the alignment of the facial features slightly and touched up the shadows a bit for a more direct 3-d effect. I also did some work on the arm... the hand I can't really do but I thought the wrist should be a lot smaller in comparison to the fist. I personally think the mystic top should have been a bit looser so modified that a bit as well.

That's my opinion, otherwise everything else seems perfecto.
 
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[05:42] <+WG_Keanu> I think I got a semi just looking at the pic
[05:42] <%kat> same

Posted: February 15, 2010 02:43 amTop
   
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Is there going to be a background when they start fighting? Also when it zooms into the guys face, it sticks. Maybe lower the time that it stays on his face by a few milliseconds and add that to the introduction so that we can see it longer.
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 03:22 amTop
   
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It's meant to stick. That's where he starts talking.
And yes there's background.
The intro is deliberately short because the trailer is 30 seconds long, and remember its Youtube. If someone wants to read the details, they'll pause.
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 04:00 amTop
   
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Getting into the deep things of it, when the girl has her staff raised and her hair is flairing, there is a pixel of blonde that shows near her hair. It shouldn't be that hard to remove I am guessing?

Also the height of the neitiznot helm's wings seem a bit short.

I am getting nit picky because I know you want it to be clean from top to bottom.
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 04:04 amTop
   
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Awesome thanks Nick and thanks Keanu.
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 08:39 amTop
   
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Guys nose is ew.
 
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"Take lobsters because I don't want us to die"
-HisLordship on WG pvp PKing, 26 April 2010.

Posted: February 15, 2010 10:06 amTop
   


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Amazing Video, and awesome suggestions.

I'll have my turn and say that that Glory Amulet is a bit Small, not like the one in RuneScape eviltardsmile.gif
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 10:19 amTop
   
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looks a little like Calista Flockhart biggrin.gif
 
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Posted: February 15, 2010 11:28 amTop
   
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Can you lighten the color of her eyebrows? They look like caterpillars. The thickness is good but the color says icky. Being a blonde usually means that you have a very light brown eyebrow.
 
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Thank you Garrett and Dallar.
“The day soldiers stop bringing you their problems
is the day you have stopped leading them.
They have either lost confidence that you can help them
or concluded that you do not care.
Either case is a failure of leadership.”
~~Colin Powell ~~

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Posted: February 16, 2010 04:04 pmTop
   
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Feedback required.
 
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Posted: February 16, 2010 04:28 pmTop
   
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Lol chinchompas X D
 
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Posted: February 16, 2010 04:29 pmTop
   
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I think the first dude we see has kind of an empty look, and his posture is kind of awkward. Doesn't seem to stand at the epitome of pride & epicness.
 
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