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Posted: April 2, 2010 11:45 pm  | |||||||
      IRC Nickname: Kung_man149 Group: Higher Guardian Posts: 1054 Member No.: 2111 Joined: October 30, 2009 Total Events Attended: 79    | chapter one:the capture *sniff sniff*."..i smell blood...and...people..." said jak steve still eating what was remaining of his last kill "well we ARE in the wilderness what do you expect sunshine and daisies?" i replied quickly "anyways we gotta run before were found by those people...or do you wanna meet a painfull death?" "i think i'll pass on dying thanks.." said jak with a slight sneer signaling he wanted to stay and fight several hours after we set out to a new location i felt a slight unease in jak's usually calm attitude"whats wrong? are you alright?""yea..i just feel homesick...what do you say we go back to our hometown and see our old friends again?" "..i'd love to but we cant remember..we were bannished...for a murder we did not commit" suddenly there was a slight shift in a nearby bush jak and me raised our weapons ready to kill whatever was hiding in that bush "come out or we will kill you!" suddenly the person behind the bush attacked us and knocked jak out cold and i was the only one standing i lunged at the stranger and then suddenly..everythng went black...did i die? i dont know but i remember feeling lighter chapter 2: the encounter I awoke several hours later in a dark place seemingly empty i then heard a familiar sounding voice i called out "jak is that you?" "yea get up and come out" i got up despite still bieng woozy from the previous attack and make my way to the door and i feel my weapons there so i pick them up along with my shield and i exited the room into a dimly lit area full of people in red capes and sky blue armor all sitting around a table and the one at the farthest point of the table said in a soft voice "welcome my name is sweetpus and beside me is""natfry101" said the person on her left "and the person to my right is sigmacontrol" she said after natfry introduced himself "were known as the menacing warriors and we need you and your friends help" sigma looked around as thought slightly suspicious "with what" i asked with a small grin on my face i then turned to jak and he looked nervous..and that scared me "a war" said natfry "against the genisis knights, the war is due next week so get ready" and that marked the downfall of my perfect little makeshift life... chapter 3: the calm before the storm jak and me quickly exited the estate and found a quiet little hill to rest upon "hey kung i have a question" "go right on ahead and ask i wont lie to ya" "are you as scared as i am?" asked jak in a scared inquisitive tone "yea...i am i've heard nothing but bad things about the genisis knights...""well we'll see what their capable of when we meet them on the battlefield now what do you say we go fishing?" "sounds good" and so we left for the closest river with our fishing poles and lobster cages, several hours later natfry woke us up from our nap"GET UP YOU TWO THEIR APPROCHING GET YOUR GEAR READY WERE HEADING OUT IN 1 HOUR'S TIME TO INTERCEPT THEM! MEET US AT THE CHURCH EAST OF TOWN" "...damn we have to get up and fight...im too tired" jak quickly said "well get up fast cuz their heading here and if you sleep your as good as dead" and he left "dude if their heading here that means alot of innocents will die...we have to get them out of here" "yea" chapter 4:its do or die the storm has come! "GUARDS GET THE CIVILIANS OUT OF HERE NOW" i heard yomamy yell out. suddenly a voice in the speaker sounded"all civilians evacuate no time to grab your items" within minutes the city was evacuated to the nearby village "alright mw we stand our ground at the center of this city and we will do battle against our enemies BUT we let them strike first" said natfry in a comanding tone,our weapons instantly unsheathed our shields were raised and sweat was running down our cheeks were ready...then again define ready.We suddenly heard several klangs made by banging armor and weapons they were there infront of us with sky blue armor and scars on their faces..blood running from the tips of their swords...at once natfry,sweetpus and sigma raised their weapons and ran forward letting out a terrifying war cry that shook the world everyone else soon followed, the battle had started, me and jak had decided to stick together and attack at the same time he shot his bow and caught someone in the neck with his arrow i struck another with my shield hitting him in the temple instantly killing him i then caught a glimpse of jak and he looked regretfull that he had shot and killed someone without provokation but after a few more kills he started to seem like he was enjoying himself..then again so did i. 9 horrificly long hours later..the war had subsided there were a few of us left menacing warriors had taken some heavy losses...the genisis knights however..had lost almost all their men all they had left were about a dozen stragglers trying to survive through the wounds we had caused...suddenly an arrow flew by jak's head i charged and killed the wounded attacker in a brutal way..infact so brutal i dare not say in this diary after another 45 minutes every man from the genisis knights had fallen and we were heading back to mwhq to heal our own wounded. chapter 5 - the loss of a friend As we got our wounded into bed's and let the medics heal them Natfry pulled me aside and told me in a rather serious tone "theres something i need to tell you..." "oh? what about?" i asked in a slightly worried tone "it's about jak...during the fight he..." he stopped dead at a loss for words. As i grabbed his lapel "COMEON MAN TELL ME I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEND TO MY BEST FRIEND!" i then suddenly let him go...for i had just realized what he was trying to say...jak steve was dead...i honestly could not believe what i had just heard...so i turned around and ran. Natfry hot at my heels to try to calm me down. As i reach the grass outside i fall to my knees and let out a scream loud enough to shake the heavens..."JAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" i then turn around to face natfry...my eyes filled with rage..."kill me damnit..." i then charged natfry with my rune scimitar gleaming in the pale moonlight. i was fighting to kill. chapter 6 - the duel : ANGER VS PASSION As the swords clashed i gave natfry a bone crushing kick to the ribs little did i know he had this all planned...he ducked pulled the edge of his scimitar back and let the handle hit me in the jaw...then there was nothing...As i woke up several hours later i saw natfry,sigmacontrol,and sweetpus sitting around my bed along with yomamy,homedawg and kingmick standing behind them all looking at me wondering if i was alright but somehow i think they knew there was something inside me..growing and they were scared of it...a madness of sorts...and i felt it...that morning i ate breakfast and explained to sweetpus i had to leave and that i was sorry for giving her such short notice so i went upstairs and took jak's old armor and donned it instead of my traditional gold trimmed rune armor and walked off into the sunset. chapter 7 - to new horizons As i walked away i remembered all the fun times i've encountered with jak steve..i still couldnt believe he was gone..i mean he was so strong, clearly a much better fighter then i am..i mean i once witnessed him take on 5 people at once and kill them all...god he was an amazing fighter but now it's up to me "..damn" i said lowering my head. "hey you get over here i want your stuff and do it quick before i kill you" "do you really want to mess with me...? because i can kill you right here right now..." the stranger came out of the bushes "hahahaha a small guy like you? couldnt even land a hi-" before he finnished that scentance...he dropped to the floor...dead "...from now on i am not kung man149...the madness has come...i am now red star 149..." i declared with eyes as dead as those on the genesis knight war site..i was no longer the kind,caring person i was before..as of that point on..i killed without provokation. chapter 8 - the birth of red star 149 As i walked the land searching for a home i have killed many strong warriors and defeated many clans singlehandedly...until i stumbled accross a clan calling themselves the crusade and it was there i truely made myself at home and there i met a person similar to myself his name was needles 16 and he taught me how to controll myself to an extent and i did truely enjoy bieng with them...untill that day me and the friends i had made in the short time i was in the crusade went to go grab a beer to celebrate me bieng able to fully control myself and then the 2 leaders showed up along with several people and attacked us all, it was at that moment i lost it once again and killed everyone of them singlehandedly...,a few short days afterwards we met up at the crusade hq and discussed plans to remake it into a new clan with new morals and new ideals.. chapter 9 - the rise and fall of chaos The clan was called raining chaos and after 6 months i was promoted to ambassador due to my commitment, shortly thereafter people just didnt feel up to keeping this clan up..therefore i left for bigger better things and thus i set out on my own again and met some very friendly clans such as the oak island pirates, the sleeping dragons , Vita infinitus among others but due to the mental unbalance going on in my head i decided not to join any...after several months of aimless wandering i decided to do someone not even the strongest warriors would do...challenge the strongest clan in geilinor ...reign of terror... chapter 10 - the death of a madman... I walked into their headquarters and attacked one of the members...he sounded the alarm and i ran outside to finnish the fight...They rushed outside and i was clearly outnumbered...120 v 1...i charged in not as red star 149 nor kung man149 but as jak steve, i had become strong...strong as jak steve was and i was loving it i enjoyed every feeling of my scimitar slicing through their flesh...until i was caught off guard and they then took their chance...it was over...i had finnally died...my legacy still lives on as the greatest warrior that ever lived. signed : Kung man149 year: unknown time:unknown city: Varrock to all my dear friends...you shall be missed... -------------------- Taken❒ Single❒ Mad✔ <+Mark``> i think the brothers GF is going into labour <+Mark``> I WANNA WATCH YU-GI-OH   | ||||||
Posted: April 2, 2010 11:48 pm | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Stokenut Group: Guest Posts: 2062 Member No.: 805 Joined: June 10, 2008 Total Events Attended: 112 | Oh dear god. Punctuation. If this wasn't TL;DR and was actually punctuated, I may have considered the possibility of thinking about reading it at some point. Edit: Chapter One - The Capture "I smell blood," Said Jak Steve, taking a deep breath before muttering "Humans!" with a hint of excitement. Even though he was still devouring the remains of his most recent victim. "Well we ARE in the wilderness. What do you expect? Sunshine and Daisies?" I replied quickly. "Anyway, we have to run before we're found by those people! Or did you fancy meeting a painful death?" "I think I'll pass on dying thanks..." said Jak, with a slight sneer signaling he wanted to stay and fight. -------------------- Over 6 years of history and friendship, deleted over a difference in an opinion. --- Challenge any creationist to a debate. They'll run away and aggressively accuse you of "attacking" them and their "beliefs". I'm sorry, please, keep teaching our kids that they'll burn in hell if they don't believe. Mutilate their genitals against their will while you're at it. Keep influencing politics and holding back vital scientific research. I'll just keep my mouth shut to "respect" your "beliefs". | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 12:02 am | |||||||
 IRC Nickname: Darth Group: Ex-Member Posts: 4601 Member No.: 838 Joined: June 12, 2008 Total Events Attended: 558 | Grammar and spelling. NEED MOAR --------------------  | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 12:04 am | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Kung_man149 Group: Higher Guardian Posts: 1054 Member No.: 2111 Joined: October 30, 2009 Total Events Attended: 79 | put the errors aside ladies this is the internet -------------------- Taken❒ Single❒ Mad✔ <+Mark``> i think the brothers GF is going into labour <+Mark``> I WANNA WATCH YU-GI-OH | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 12:05 am | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Group: Elite Guardian Posts: 7306 Member No.: 47 Joined: December 30, 2007 Total Events Attended: 343 | Not my cup of tea -------------------- July 5, 2007 - June 27, 2011 | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 12:07 am | |||||||
 IRC Nickname: Imbryanman Group: Higher Guardian Posts: 335 Member No.: 2133 Joined: November 15, 2009 Total Events Attended: 90 | umm i don git it --------------------
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Posted: April 3, 2010 12:07 am | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Stokenut Group: Guest Posts: 2062 Member No.: 805 Joined: June 10, 2008 Total Events Attended: 112 |
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA tea. -------------------- Over 6 years of history and friendship, deleted over a difference in an opinion. --- Challenge any creationist to a debate. They'll run away and aggressively accuse you of "attacking" them and their "beliefs". I'm sorry, please, keep teaching our kids that they'll burn in hell if they don't believe. Mutilate their genitals against their will while you're at it. Keep influencing politics and holding back vital scientific research. I'll just keep my mouth shut to "respect" your "beliefs". | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 12:09 am | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Kung_man149 Group: Higher Guardian Posts: 1054 Member No.: 2111 Joined: October 30, 2009 Total Events Attended: 79 |
stoke your really starting to piss me off -------------------- Taken❒ Single❒ Mad✔ <+Mark``> i think the brothers GF is going into labour <+Mark``> I WANNA WATCH YU-GI-OH | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 01:54 am | |||||||
 IRC Nickname: DG_Keanu Group: Council Posts: 4782 Member No.: 2033 Joined: August 25, 2009 Total Events Attended: 173 |
Starting? Kung that may be fucking brilliant but I can't understand more than 3 lines of tl;dr if it doesn't have the proper punctuation/grammar/spelling. I vote to split the Gallery forum and make a new one called the Library for stuff like creative writing like this. --------------------  [05:42] <+WG_Keanu> I think I got a semi just looking at the pic [05:42] <%kat> same | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 04:49 pm | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Stokenut Group: Guest Posts: 2062 Member No.: 805 Joined: June 10, 2008 Total Events Attended: 112 |
Then I have succeeded. -------------------- Over 6 years of history and friendship, deleted over a difference in an opinion. --- Challenge any creationist to a debate. They'll run away and aggressively accuse you of "attacking" them and their "beliefs". I'm sorry, please, keep teaching our kids that they'll burn in hell if they don't believe. Mutilate their genitals against their will while you're at it. Keep influencing politics and holding back vital scientific research. I'll just keep my mouth shut to "respect" your "beliefs". | ||||||
Posted: April 3, 2010 06:46 pm | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Sum41xx Group: Emeritus Posts: 630 Member No.: 102 Joined: January 3, 2008 Total Events Attended: 0 |
It's ok. This is how stoke makes up for having a 1/2 inch albino penis that stinks of fish. --------------------   Proud WG member since December 2003 | ||||||
Posted: April 8, 2010 11:20 pm | |||||||
| IRC Nickname: Group: Banned Posts: 2447 Member No.: 114 Joined: January 8, 2008 Total Events Attended: 149 |
^ This
^ And that. You really call barely a paragraph a chapter? Try removing the chapter bits and just have it as a short story. And yes, I've done some writing, and I read constantly. So I know what I'm talking about. And no, I didn't read it. I was searching for a box of punctuation to give you.  -------------------- | ||||||
my story, enjoy