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 My first ever RSMV..., Plz be nice even if u think it sucks...
Posted: September 27, 2008 01:26 pmTop
   
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Actual link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1jlv-Xo5is

So...what do you think? Any comments?
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 01:41 pmTop
   
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Watched it before, Nice Video hash.png
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 01:44 pmTop
   
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Thanks! laugh.gif
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 01:45 pmTop
   
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You should turn on the option to make it high detail to make it look better, not sure how you do that though.
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 05:29 pmTop
   
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10/10
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 05:40 pmTop
   
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Nice one man. Good work! 5/5.
 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 06:49 pmTop
   
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Okay, a few things to change to improve -


1. Take the hypercam logo out, it's ugly. Any RSMVs I see that have that logo in the top left I usually stop watching immediately. (But I watched all of yours, dw)

2. Move the camera. Staring at you from a top angle the whole time is boring + makes the text quite hard to read sometimes. Panning works too.. experiment with that.

3. A lot of the locations and ideas were quite good. Like the 'set your spirit free' part with the shade burning, that was great, well done on the creativity. biggrin.gif


Overall nice job on your first, I'd rate 6/10. Don't take that too seriously, I straight up say what I think and how you can improve, rather than being nice and rating 10/10 automatically. tongue.gif (Not that that's wrong or anything, I just don't like that at all)


Best of luck with your next videos if you plan to make them. wink2.gif

 
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Posted: September 27, 2008 06:59 pmTop
   
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1 question. Do you seriously listen to that?
 
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Dragon boots:29 Whips:2

Posted: September 27, 2008 09:33 pmTop
   
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Looks good sir.
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 12:33 amTop
   


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Nice, I like your creativity!
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 01:52 amTop
   
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QUOTE (For Sooth @ September 27, 2008 01:59 pm)
1 question. Do you seriously listen to that?

Well its a DJMax portable 2 song (a fun psp game) and I like the song, so I decided to do an RSMV on it

Oh and my sig is also the picture of a DJMP2 song (you will be able tosee "composed by xxdbxx" etc.)

Btw how do I take out the hypercam logo without registering? (I'm poor)
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 04:28 amTop
   
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QUOTE (swampert28 @ September 27, 2008 08:52 pm)
Btw how do I take out the hypercam logo without registering? (I'm poor)

You can't, which is why you pan it out by zooming in. wink.gif
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 06:52 amTop
   
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I did have a code for Camtasia which is alot better than Hypercam but I seem to have misplaced it sad.gif I'll get back to you if I find it.

EDIT: Found an easier way to get registered Hypercam. I've tried it an it works and you don't have to download anything.
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Posted: September 28, 2008 07:17 amTop
   
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Tyvm for the link! It works! laugh.gif
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 09:27 amTop
   
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I use crack find for all my low pro keys for stuff like hyper cam. Deleted HyperCam because I would never use it anyway though lol.
 
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Posted: September 28, 2008 10:50 amTop
   
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I agreed with the improvements suggested, but it was very creative.

The outfit or the angle did make it a bit harder to watch. You could also add some like different text. like white: or ect

The brown of your outfit blended in alot with some of those backgrounds. Overall it was very nice. Think about background color a lil more when choosing your outfit. Alot of RS is green and brown.
 
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