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"Something Must Be"
By Da Mate Nate on 11/06/2008
"Something Must Be"
Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.
Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.
Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.
Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.
Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.
Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
"Let this pain end,"
is all my heart will shout.
Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.
Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.
Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.
Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.
Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.
Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
"Let this pain end,"
is all my heart will shout.
By Sithofwookie on 11/06/2008
thats depressing
By Parth23 Jani on 11/06/2008
By Mickey on 11/06/2008
| QUOTE (Parth23 Jani @ June 11, 2008 08:04 pm) |
| http://help.com/post/158849-something-must-be-wrong-with-me Google init  |
Rofl good find. Nice to know you lied to us
By David on 11/06/2008
Why assume that he copied it? Maybe he posted that himself and didn't leave a name?
By Mickey on 11/06/2008
| QUOTE (1colonel1 @ June 11, 2008 08:15 pm) |
| Why assume that he copied it? Maybe he posted that himself and didn't leave a name? |
[21:49:25] <+Madd|Mickey> When did you write it?
[21:49:39] <[Nate]> which 1?
[21:49:48] <+Madd|Mickey> The one you posted in Guest Talk
[21:49:56] <[Nate]> i posted 5 there?
[21:49:58] <[Nate]> lol
[21:50:14] * ssricky ([email protected]) has left #Wg_Lobby
[21:50:23] <+Madd|Mickey> http://www.wildernessguardians.com/forum/i...?showtopic=3191
[21:50:25] <+Madd|Mickey> That one
[21:50:50] <[Nate]> 2 days ago
[21:51:34] <[Nate]> i was feeling a litle depressed
Look at the bottem of the poem on that site. Written a month ago?
By David on 12/06/2008
My apologies for not having read that chat session.
By Bambaleo on 12/06/2008
make one topic for all of your poems.
By Sithofwookie on 12/06/2008
Plagiarism lmao
By Tmal34 on 12/06/2008
You plagiarized it like a pro though 
By Yingyang06 on 12/06/2008
| QUOTE (Sithofwookie @ June 12, 2008 05:32 am) |
| Plagiarism lmao |
Agreed
By Da Mate Nate on 12/06/2008
i didnt know i was plagurizing bc i have never heard that poem before. i just started to write it like that bc my friend helps me with poems if i cant get them 2 sound right and that is what she said made it sound better. it didnt use to have something must be wrong with me. it use to say "why do i feel this way" so i am sorry that it looked like i plagurized.
On a side note: I clicked that link yesterday and that dude who wrote that poem is very good.
On a side note: I clicked that link yesterday and that dude who wrote that poem is very good.
By Gusmighster on 12/06/2008
Epic dude, epic..
By Toshortofnam on 21/01/2009
Its ok
By Multikill529 on 21/01/2009
Holy thread necro Batman!
By Reticked on 24/01/2009
A couple words seem misplaced, but then again I'm not one for poetry.
By the way, epic bump.
By the way, epic bump.
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