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RuneScape Poem
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
So I have to write this Poem for my English Class...the only requirements were that it be 10+ lines and have to do with "losing something". I'm not very creative, so I had no ideas. And then I made a joke about writing about RuneScape. So I wrote this poem. (Yeah, I know, it's sad. xD) I'm honestly contemplating writing a description about what it is to my teacher at the bottom and handing this in. What do you think? xD
Upon The Loss of My Whip
T'was a day so gran'
A great day for PKing indeed.
When I came across a man,
who seemed to be in need.
I asked what had ailed him,
and he said with a mellow face.
"I need help Slaying a demon grim,
or my blood he shall taste."
I had agreed to aid him in his quest,
because to him it would be a bother.
In the field of Demon Slaying, I'm the best,
contested by no other.
I followed him to where he said the beast would be,
but when we arrived it was something of a different kind.
For there were many a foe, all trying to slay ME.
I had tried to run, but nowhere to hide could I find.
So good fight Player001, I lose my Whip to thee.
Upon The Loss of My Whip
T'was a day so gran'
A great day for PKing indeed.
When I came across a man,
who seemed to be in need.
I asked what had ailed him,
and he said with a mellow face.
"I need help Slaying a demon grim,
or my blood he shall taste."
I had agreed to aid him in his quest,
because to him it would be a bother.
In the field of Demon Slaying, I'm the best,
contested by no other.
I followed him to where he said the beast would be,
but when we arrived it was something of a different kind.
For there were many a foe, all trying to slay ME.
I had tried to run, but nowhere to hide could I find.
So good fight Player001, I lose my Whip to thee.
By Dilz621 on 20/09/2008
Lol nice (Y)
By Sonixpber on 20/09/2008
You fail, hard. Nuff said.
By Dorcha3377 on 20/09/2008
Its really good I think! A PLUS
By Back to Own on 20/09/2008
/me points to corner
If I were you, I would make it like really concealed and use symbolic things to represent getting pked and losing your whip
If I were you, I would make it like really concealed and use symbolic things to represent getting pked and losing your whip
By For Sooth on 20/09/2008
Change
When I came across a man,
who seemed to be in need.
to When I came across a man,
indeed, this man, was a man in need.
When I came across a man,
who seemed to be in need.
to When I came across a man,
indeed, this man, was a man in need.
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (For Sooth @ September 20, 2008 05:42 pm) |
| Change When I came across a man, who seemed to be in need. to When I came across a man, indeed, this man, was a man in need. |
Nah, I'm content with what I have there, lol.
By Bambaleo on 20/09/2008
to be honest....if you were in my class i would laugh you out, making a poem about a computer game AND read it out loud in your class, that's a social suicide. Keeping your privat life at home is a good idea, try it.
but all in all it it pretty nice, i wouldn't have managed to write it half as good as you have.
but all in all it it pretty nice, i wouldn't have managed to write it half as good as you have.
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Bambaleo @ September 20, 2008 06:19 pm) |
| to be honest....if you were in my class i would laugh you out, making a poem about a computer game AND read it out loud in your class, that's a social suicide. Keeping your privat life at home is a good idea, try it. |
It's not a "private life" it's a game. A social game, hence "Massive Multiplayer" in the MMORPG. People know that I play RuneScape, and not to mention I'm not even presenting it...it's just a hand in.
By Bambaleo on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Pbplayer9 @ September 20, 2008 10:21 pm) | ||
It's not a "private life" it's a game. A social game, hence "Massive Multiplayer" in the MMORPG. People know that I play RuneScape, and not to mention I'm not even presenting it...it's just a hand in. |
things you do at home in your free time is called "Private Life"
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Bambaleo @ September 20, 2008 06:24 pm) | ||||
things you do at home in your free time is called "Private Life" |
Eh, it all really depends on what you're doing. xD
By George on 20/09/2008
I really like that.
Especially the third stanza, its very fluent, well done
Especially the third stanza, its very fluent, well done
By Bambaleo on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Pbplayer9 @ September 20, 2008 10:26 pm) | ||||||
Eh, it all really depends on what you're doing. xD |
true, just don't get me wrong, you know i love you vince
i'm just letting you know how i see it and what i would do if some guy in my class would write a poem about WoW or something like that....but you're good to go if there are no Bambaleos in your class 
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
Lmao, I know Bam. I know it would be like that, tbh. xD I just have no ideas for actual poetry, so that might be my last resort. xD
By Winddancir on 20/09/2008
Do it. Turn it in.
By Yingyang06 on 20/09/2008
I think it's a pretty quick and catchy poem, who know's maybe the teacher or his/her son/daughter plays. You may never know!
By Mistah Vince on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Yingyang06 @ September 20, 2008 07:08 pm) |
| I think it's a pretty quick and catchy poem, who know's maybe the teacher or his/her son/daughter plays. You may never know! |
Lmao...then wouldn't it be ironic if my teacher was the person who PKed my Whip?
Granted, it is a fictional poem...but eh.
By Yingyang06 on 20/09/2008
| QUOTE (Pbplayer9 @ September 20, 2008 11:16 pm) | ||
Lmao...then wouldn't it be ironic if my teacher was the person who PKed my Whip? Granted, it is a fictional poem...but eh. |
That would be very ironic, imagine them sat at home with your whip and NOW your poem!
! By Havochaha on 20/09/2008
made me giggle nice rhyming
By Sithofwookie on 21/09/2008
lol you should change the guys name to Sithofwookie
By Mistah Vince on 21/09/2008
| QUOTE (Sithofwookie @ September 20, 2008 10:03 pm) |
| lol you should change the guys name to Sithofwookie |
You could never KO me, Sith.
By Ikahigurashi on 21/09/2008
This is so ridiculous, that it will work...
Explanatory paragraph might be necessary.
Explanatory paragraph might be necessary.
By Baconman81 on 21/09/2008
| QUOTE (Pbplayer9 @ September 20, 2008 04:36 pm) |
| So good fight Baconman81, I lose my Whip to thee. |
Good fight noob I got your whip!
By Pyro Blade26 on 21/09/2008
I've got a poem for Runescape!!!!!
Roses are Red.
Violets are Blue.
Fuck with me,
And I'll DDS you!
thats some deep intellectual stuff right there
Roses are Red.
Violets are Blue.
Fuck with me,
And I'll DDS you!
thats some deep intellectual stuff right there
By Yingyang06 on 21/09/2008
| QUOTE (Pyro Blade26 @ September 21, 2008 04:04 am) |
| I've got a poem for Runescape!!!!! Roses are Red. Violets are Blue. Fuck with me, And I'll DDS you! thats some deep intellectual stuff right there |
LMFAO!
By Geoff_Bland on 21/09/2008
Lmfao, it's actually pretty good Vince
By NightRawrs on 21/09/2008
Very nice
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