Mind rating this?

Over the past month I've been experimenting with writing my own music. Having taken an interest in solo piano music in general. This is the first thing I've written that is longer than about 30 seconds and *most* of it sounds in place and in time.

I think in total i spent about 25 hours on it. Which is a lot for such a small piece i guess but I don't have a clue what I'm doing. I'm trying to learn as much as i can through composition. Reading books and such bores the hell out of me.

http://media.putfile.com/What-is-music-if-...y-Steve-Grocott

For a little background on it; i wrote it all with my ex-gf in mind. We're still really good friends and this is for her. Even though we neutrally agreed to end it after i started and before i finished composing this. Eugene gave me a little help when i got stuck.

You know my feelings#

I think it's absolutely great, and fits in with the mood perfectly.

Listen to it guys, it's 2mins of your lives well spent, you'll learn a lot about Steve that you didn't actually know.

10/10 - If I was female, we'd be laid at 1minute 45 seconds of that piece#

~Abs

You should ask Gene to rate it.

But it's very pleasant to listen to that's for sure.

It's pretty good. But no sex for you.

seriously. It was amazing, especially since your not a musician.
10/10 was really relaxing and kept me listening.

I think it is really nice
I like the violin over the flute too

LOLOLOL!
I love the part where it went spastic.

The note at 1:45 was exagerated, it went on for to long in my opinion.

Other than that I thought it flowed nicely. Good job.

Very nice.

makes me want to go to sleep its relaxing nice job stoke

I thought it was very good. It had a little ring in it that kept me interested.

touching, Personally, knowing the background with your whole GF stuff, opens up the song

We'll always be friends Steve <3